good pacing, try doing something more original
I can't give graphics points for ripping off game sprites (or sound points for unoriginal and unmodified music), but I thought the staging and choices of shots were pretty good. If you could do your own art and make your own music (or meet people who can do either), I think you have got potential for doing something cool. Just have to stick your neck out a little.
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